I write where I passed. . . I write in my grave.
I write in passing. . . there’s naught I can save.
Writing can sometimes rekindle my gall.
Can writing sometimes rekindle a crawl?
Would you ditch me here in this tomb to rot?
You observed me carefully mark my spot.
I sunk in sin, duped by a false lover.
What love grants you to die for another?

I grew in sin, became a false lover.
False love robbed you of me to another.
What’s reckless, what’s not. I deserve it all.
But cautious love will seize me when I fall.
I lie in my grave. . . I whisper your name. . .
Remind myself that love’s always the same.
© Jonathan Pines and WritingWithStrangers, 2019, except where noted otherwise. All rights reserved.
Profound!
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Thanks Mermaid. You always find great words to compliment with 🙂
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I don’t speak much, so always use 3-5 words.
But I really mean the complements.
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You say a lot in so few words.
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Really sweet of you.
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Thanks but the sweetness is all yours, Kajal.
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Compliments*
Ugh my keyboard!
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🙂
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Wow, I love this!
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Thanks Susan! 🙂
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Oh the pain you have communicated through this. False love still love remains the same.
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Thanks Pallavi. My greatest compliment is that someone can connect emotionally with what I write.
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Nice rhyme 🙂
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Thanks EC 🙂
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Hello, pleased to make your acquaintance.
This was an intricate poem—writing from our own graves. I’ve been there too, I am sure of it. Lovely write!
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Thanks so much. I’m glad we found each other’s blogs 🙂
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Heartfelt!
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Thanks Richa 🙂
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Hi there, I just posted something new on my blog. Just thought I’d let you know since you were asking 💕
https://saania2806.wordpress.com/2019/11/13/the-magic-of-spreading-love-2/
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Just did. . . it’s so beautiful!!!
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