Sometimes loneliness is a gateway. . .
Fellow poets, this is a collaboration I did with the blog “I Refuse to Give Up” by Sakshi and my blog, “Writing with Strangers.” This was my first collaboration. I hope you enjoy. . .
Sakshi: Italics
Me: Non Italics

Amidst the hustle bustle
Of those crowded streets
A million smiles
Guffaws and squeals
Alone but not lone
On streets and at home
Just a feeling that I feel
Hoping it will heal. . .
The gurgling water stream
Bringing a sense of calm
But heart still yearns
For its soul’s balm
I feel at home in nature,
the earth gives me nurture.
Is it wrong to feel more okay
when people are away?
Peace is achieved
When quiesce is embraced
Maybe loneliness
Is a gateway.
Β© Sakshi Gangwani & Joey Blue/writingwithstrangers.com, 2019, except where noted. All rights reserved.
Had fun collaborating with you Joey π
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Same here, really happy with how it turned out π
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Great collaboration!
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thanks! I think I will do more.
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Youβre welcome!
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very well done! π
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Thanks so much Wendi!!
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my pleasure Joey!
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Sometimes it is. Nice collab, well done.
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Thanks for stopping by, Ankit.
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My pleasure.
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Loved it.π
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Thanks – really encouraging!
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You both did well together.
How about trying to write a song?
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Thanks that sounds like a good idea! Might be a little hard, though, considering we live halfway across the world! π
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Morning coffe an joy poems….no better start of the day.Have a great week paisanπ
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Thanks, glad you liked it too paisan from across the lake.
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Wonderful collaboration! The final piece turned out great: a piece from two worlds. π
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Thanks so much, Sa! Nice to hear from you!
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You’re welcome! Hope you enjoyed the fourth!
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I did – but got too much sun! Hope you did, too, Sa!
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